Dr. Night

"Doctor, what the hell do you think you are doing" asks the young nurse as she comes rushing through the doorway.1

He turns around slowly, she gasps dropping the tray of utensils that she was carrying in her small thin arms. His face comes into view, his eyes are piercing red like flames, his face is all scrunched up into a menacing glare, blood drips from his chin in rivulets, and inside his mouth, she can make out two long fangs stained with blood.2

He opens his mouth and says "Did I tell you to not come in here Anna" he hollers flinging the patient that's dangling in his arms at the far corner of the operating room, the body hits the wall and slides down leaving a trail of blood on it's surface with a sikening thud.3

"I-I-I'm so sorry" she yells turning to run, he leaps at the nurse digging his long nails into her shoulders, fresh blood leaks from beneath the shirt down her arms, and lashes his head toward her throat, teeth sink into the tender flesh, she screams in pain, blood pours down her throat in waves.4

"Noooo, please...noo...". The pain worsens, he starts chewing away at the flesh, blood squirts out into his face, he pays no mind, as he tears away flesh like tissue paper.5

Splurting sounds escape her throat as she tries to speak, blood seeps through her open lips and down her neck. Her body becomes numb, her temperature drops quickly, she feels like ice, her pulse steadily slows down as he removes his head and drops her body to the floor gently.6

Blood seeps from the open wound squirting the floor with a dark maroon blood, she lays there on the tiled floor bleeding to death, the last thing she sees is a kind elderly mans face, the doctors human face looking down at her, "I'm sorry...my dear...but...you...know...too...much, it's your ti...me to...go, fare...well...hahahahahaha!".7

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  • Violet Hawthorne
    July 23, 2007
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    very nice but a bit to dramatic

  • Word
    April 29, 2007

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    Very very very creepy. Reminds be of an espisode of Masters of Horror episode. Loved this line:"the tiled floor bleeding to death"
    Thanks for the read
    peace


  • comedy and tragedy
    April 27, 2007

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    I liked this alot, it makes me wonder about the local doctors in my area. But the plot was good, and it has great imagrey.