Her neck had been sliced. She was dead. Her friends had been looking for her when they noticed she was gone. But it was too late. The crime had been committed, the villain left the scene. After days of searching it was a lost cause, the friends, family and search parties left the woods to let the body decompose into the ground. What they wouldn’t know until it was too late was that the girl, now known as Needles, would kill everyone that loved her the same way she died. A thousand needles poked in each centimeter of their neck.
A contest entry
- Short, Sweet, and Sizzling by Arcularis.
750 points, ended May 26, 2007, 17 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Mysteries by Blackwings.
170 points, ended May 14, 2007, 10 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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wow!!!
that would be such an intersting way to be murdered. This was very well written, i'd rather die like this than get shot. It's a lot slower.....
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NICE
short and very well wrote , love it
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Wow!!! I LOVED IT!!!! Nice job!!!!! Thanks for entering and goood luck!!!!!
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Wow...
What a terrible way to die, but yet I found this to be fascinating. I am more than relieved to not know this girl in the story. I wish you luck in the contest. -
wow...chilling and captivating! this leaves room for more to be written, which is easy to do with 100 words. i'm glad that i didn't know her, because that would be a terrible way to die!
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