Tony’s hands began to shake with fear, as the glint from the knife I was holding hit his eyes. He started squirming on the table trying to break free. His struggle made this all the more enjoyable.
While his screams of panic rang in my ears, I slowly slid the knife across his throat. The blood poured in sheets down to his chest. I could hear the air escaping from the gaping slit. It wouldn’t be long now.
Tony tried one last fruitless attempt at finding air before a gurgle of blood slipped out of the tear in this throat.
Author notes
This is for a contest...
In a list
A contest entry
- Short, Sweet, and Sizzling by Arcularis.
750 points, ended May 26, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I don't remember reading this...or even seeing it posted.
Odd. *kicks my notes once again*
Anyway...I'm scared. *backs away from the story* heheh I loved it! Should I be worried...about me liking it I mean? Should I read happi--err why am I asking you? Ignore this. I'm an idiot.
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Woa, this was very descriptive. I could see it happening in my minds eye. Very gory too.
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shudders
oh, so very graphic. and almost kinda kinky. i liked this enough to get over my overactive imagination, and stomach some blood. short, sweet, creepy. i like it
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I really like your writing style. Nice imagery. I really dig these type of exercises, don't you? Everything is so compact and it leaves more for the mind to consider. Nice job!
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Great imagry and word flow. Good luck in your contest. I thought this was fantastic.
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very nicely done in 100 words! the murder scene was portrayed nicely and was still chilling even with the word limit!
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Cutting (if you'll pardon the pun) straight to the chase here allows you time to wonderfully describe the murder within the word limit.
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Wow.. *bows down in worship*
Know what? Most of the Tony's I meet in real life did something bad to me. So the 100 words in this piece just made this all the more delightful to read
matched with your words, the piece is JUST perfect. I imagined myself doing that to one of them Tony's.. *satisfied grin* ^______^
Thanks for sharing this, Keli!
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sometimes you worry me... perhaps you are more morbid than I?
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I worry you? O_o Aww! *hug*
I am ing remember? 
That OR I just harbor so many ill feelings towards Tonys
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Exactly 100 words. Wonderful. Thanks for entering!
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great job menya i enjoyed this very much so
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100 words a completed scene. wonderful imagery, you can feel for the character even if you don't know allthe what's and the who's good luck in the contest babe. this is a very well done murder
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Ew...yuck...! lol
I liked it though...very psychotic, but good!
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