Tinkle

Tinkle tinkle little pee,

how I wonder how you came to be.

Way up high inside of me.

How did you come out of me?

Tinkle tinkle little pee,

how I wonder how you came to be.

(to the tune of "Twinkle twinkle little star")

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its fun to sing this in the bathroom!

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  • plurangel silver member
    February 4, 2008

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    lol oh wow this is very cute. at first i didnt even realize that it would be to the tune of twinkle lil star and then i read it. and i started rolling on the floor laughing lol. great work!!!


  • IntrepidFantasy Greeters member
    February 3, 2008
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    LOL oh my god thats so cute and funny. I think I need to pee now LOL! Very creative!

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • Greeneyes15
    February 2, 2008

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    Hahahaha! Lmao! that so funny! LOVE it! but now i seriously do have to pee! but this is great...really... lol!

    peace&love,
    greeneyes


  • StillWalkingAlone
    June 12, 2007
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    well i really have to pee now...thanks.


  • Kevan gold member
    May 5, 2007

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    lol, I'm gonna sing this in the bathroom when I go. I think it went without saying that it was to the tune of twinkle twinkle little star, haha. I like the background colours too
    Great job, very funny!
    ~Kevan~


  • EtherealButterfly
    April 30, 2007
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    cute.


  • kelseyo
    April 29, 2007
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    wow.....


  • Your Anything
    April 26, 2007
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    very funny


  • greene
    April 25, 2007
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    wow kt


  • lemonlover14
    April 25, 2007

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    tis a quite amusing song in the way in which it causes me to gasp for breath amidst tumultous laughter. ha ha ha me an english ninja! i will try remember this the next time i'm in the bathroom!

  • lubyben
    April 25, 2007
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    3

    it doesnt do with the rythm andi like it wery much.

  • Kalamina
    April 24, 2007
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    This was funny, it made me laugh!

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