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Daddy's name was Jack the Ripper.

The cat's in the fridge again!

He laughed; she was busy screaming.

Please, don't trip over the bodies.

...girls don't have one of those.

What do you mean you're pregnant?

Lips touched, souls merged, love formed.

Don't you dare leave me now.

His eyes burned with demonic fire.

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  • Faeinthewood
    May 10, 2007

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    it was a little confusing but it was still good. Jack the Ripper has a kid...thats just an amazing idea! go u! *claps*


  • Delfishie
    April 23, 2007
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    ooohhhhh

    These were really good! I especially loved the first one - what a great story idea! I love the whole concept!

    "What do you mean your pregnant?" - grammar mistake. It should be "you're".

    I really liked the diversity of these sentences and how they weren't all restricted to one genre.

    Great job!


    • lovely nightmare
      April 23, 2007
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      Thank you Sorry about the grammar mistake, I'm kinda mad I missed that -- I'm usually a grammar psycho