Once there was a forester that was called to help his lord in battle. When he arrived he was blamed for not bringing rangers to help.The rangers were needed. They were going to kill him , but a knight of the evil king saved him right away in a breezing flash. He traveled with the knight to his land.It was a long trip. The forester saw that the king was good here that he stayed with and his lord was the evil one. He then dicided to help defeat his lord.
It was a big battle but with help the forester could do it. He knew he could. Together the ranger died. Anyways the lord was defeated.
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This is by my brother
Please tell me what you think
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I do think it could be longer...But it was good. Tell your brother good job.
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It could be longer, but it is a good beginning. I like it. Tell your brother he did a nice job ^.^
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greatly done
hmm a begining of a great epic
i wanna read how it develops
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I agree with you that it could be longer. Some spelling corrections and more details just might make this story worth writing. The whole story idea was good. How old is your brother exactly?
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My brother is 14. His real versoin will be a lot better. He just wanted to see how people liked it in a short versoin to see if the story was a good idea.
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I like kings and knights. I have an idea that this could be a lot longer. Great though!
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