I wanna go to sleep and I wanna go to see my friend. But just one thing I am in vacation.I am swimming and I am eating I just wanna be a free girl. My friends call me but I am not at home.I can't use the computer or my lotop.Just 1 thing is fun I am in a hotel sleeping.I telled my mom I will go home. If no my brian is going to melt.My mom got scared that I will melt so she run and run away.I laugh every day but my father was mad.
I never scared my mom.Just once I scard her.When I got to school.My Friend Matilda scremd at me when I didn't what to here the phone.Susie cry because she think I died.That was the end all my life.
THE END!
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- The Best Two Paragraphs You've Ever Written by Delfishie.
175 points, ended April 30, 2007, 20 entries
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Good but there are many mistakes. Ask someone for help next time. That was confusingAaaah!hmmmm
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I'm not sure what to think of this. Were all the grammar and spelling errors intentional?
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That was confusing.
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Good but there are many mistakes. Ask someone for help next time.
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