Yes, the prologue is crappy. Rough draft. Ah, i almost gave up on this prologue, but just had to write it! I wanted to develop Jazzy's character before he becomes a bloodthirsty newborn vamp! Don't worry, next chapter shall be out soon! I'm just figuring exactly how to write it .
Also, I didn't realize Jacob(Jasper's brother) was a name in Twilight until I remembered, "Oh, yeah, Jacob." Then, I figured I should change his name, but I like it this way.
The picture above is human Jasper, being sad 'cause he will miss his family.