The moon rises, shinning within the night sky in all its glory and I welcome the sight of this all-knowing sphere in the heavens that beckons me to come play once again. The thick clouds in the distance hail the promise of sweet rain as the crooked finger of light illuminates the edge of the land where the moon had failed to touch. 1
I feel the slight shift of the temperature drop as the wind begins to increase and my senses heighten to sharp clarity. The rain is much closer than it first had whispered, though it seems the Rain Lord has decided to tease this night and keep that coolness from me. 2
It is here when frustration settles in that I feel her stir within. The Beast. She is clawing at my frame, begging me to release my hold of her. Then suddenly Zeus, as if he had grown tired of his fun, released his power and in a resounding snap of thunder the night sky was illuminated in pale-blue light. Deep within, that primitive growl that had been building deep within my soul escaped my lush lips. She was ready and she wanted out. NOW.3
It was with that animal roar for freedom that my eyes flickered to sharp yellow and my back curled, dropping me to my knees. It was a painful pleasure as my human form slowly slipped from its station; replaced with the slickness of my black fur. All my issues of having to please others fall into oblivion, leaving me… only me.4
I scratched the gnawing itch of my reformed legs requesting me to run, when I caught his scent. The scent of my mate… he was out there calming his own ache of reformed muscles. He had been awaiting the moon, just as I, to awaken the beast within and now he burned for me to join him. Bounding through the dense foliage, my beast leaped toward that of our mate, hoping we’d make it before our urges for him were overpowering. 5
Will we make it in time?6
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Comments
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oo I liked it, can you PLEASE check out my stuff, i noticed one of your favorite aothors was steven king I think, and my writing is somehat like his, so PLEASe check out my story, thxs, and I will understand if you odnt got time. BUT GOOD JOB!
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I am glad I read this one~
I read PartII first...why do I do that
Loved this one as well~
Keep on writing and exciting...Love those eyes~
and much love~Desire
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I found a typo in your first paragraph - crocked....I believe you meant crooked? Easy mistake to make and spell checkers won't catch it when your typo is a real word. You and I also seem to share a tendency to change tense midstream.
Other than those two completely trivial issues, this piece was written very well with vivid imagery and a lot of style. Overall, this is an excellent piece of work! -
Whoaa.....love the energy and visuals in this. It really grabs hold of you and puts you right there, a delight for the imagination and mental imagery!


