“Hey cutie, you alone?” a young man in his early twenties asks.2
“What does it look like to you?” I reply.3
“That you could use a really man to keep you company.”4
“Well when you find one, let me know.” I say as I get up and walk over to the bar. Sure I’m under age but my friends the bartender and doesn’t care. I order myself a glass of lemonade and vodka. I could tell already to night was going to be a long one. I look around the room for someone who catches my eye. I notice I young woman in the corner all by herself. She is beautiful, I can’t believe it. Her long black hair and pale blue eyes, her slender waist, and the curves in all the right places. I sit myself on the stool and wait till I get up the nerve to ask her for a dance. She finally looks up, and smiles at me, making my heart go wild. Slowly I stand up; I just have to talk to this girl. I make my way over never taking my eyes off her. 5
“Hi, I’m Gina. I couldn’t help but notice that you’re alone.”6
“Hey I’m Rachell, there’s not much calls in the lesbian department at parties like this one. It seems like its mostly guys or straight girls. But you your different from them.”7
“Is it that obvious? I mean I’ve never told any one before.” I say in dumb believe.8
“Well the fact that you have been the only one to talk to me was a hint. And the fact that you don’t look at the guys in the exact same way as the girls.” 9
“Well its different with them. I like them and all but you were just so gorgeous I couldn’t help but notice you. I can’t believe I just said that.”10
“You’re pretty yourself. And you have a great smile, you should do it more often.”11
“Hey do you want to go some where quieter so we can talk or whatever?”12
“Sure sounds great.” We both stand up and she grabs a hold of my hand. She lends me down a dark hall way and up the stairs. We reach a room at the other end of the house. She opens the door and turns on the lights. “So would I be the first girl you ever wanted to be with.”13
“Yes you would be. You’d be the first I’ve ever been with, actually.”14
“Good then we can take it slow.” She said as she ran her hands down my arms, making me shiver. She leans forward and touches her lips to mine gently, running her tongue over my lips asking for entrance, I part my lips slowly giving into the kiss. Her tongue slides in my mouth and runs it across mine. I return the treatment that she is giving me. I run my hands up and down her back and she kisses me hard her and I moan into her mouth. She pulls her face a way and looks into my eyes. “Are you sure you want this? She asks sweetly. And all I can say is “yes”. She guides me over to the bed and lays me down on it. I pull her down next to me and kiss her hard on the mouth. She slowly kisses down my jaw line and starts down my neck; softly she starts to nibble sending shivers down my spine. Her hands reach up under my shirt and unclasp by bra; she slides her hands under and run them over my chest, and pinches my erect nipples. I slowly sit up and pull my shirt over my head, and slide the bra straps off my shoulders. I reach over and pull her dress off over her head, revealing that she wore nothing under. “Planning for something?” I ask jokingly. “No just hoping.” Was the response I got. I stand up and unbutton my pants but her hands stop mine and she looks up. She puts her mouth to my stomach and licks her way up to my bare chest. Slowly getting to her knees and taking my right nipple in her mouth. I moan quietly as she sucks it running her hands down between my thighs. She bites down softly and undoes my pants, I gasp as I feel her fingers at the top of my panty line. I slide off my sandals and she pulls down my pants. Taking her mouth away from me and helps me back on to the bed. I lie there in just a small black thong. I see her smile and there’s a glimmer in her eyes as she takes in the sight she sees. She reaches down and slides the thong from my hips, kissing my stomach till she gets it off my legs. Slowly she leans down and kisses up and down my thighs, she nips at my right and moves up. Slowly she takes my clit in her mouth and flicks her tongue over it. I shiver with delight. She licks my cunt with her tongue and moves back to my clit. She reaches up with her right hand as I moan, and slides a finger in I gasp, it felt so good so right. She pulls her mouth away looking at me as she slides in another. She moves them in and out slowly at first, making small circles with them at time. I moan with pleasure and she smiles. And kisses me on the lips. I beg her for more with the passion of my kiss and she moans as I scratch down her back. She reaches over next to the bed and pulls out something black with straps. She pulls her fingers out of me and I moan wanting more. She giggles and smiles down as she slides something into her and straps the thing on. She positions her self at my opening and thrusts the object in I moan in pain and delight and pull her down to bite her neck. She moans and reaches back and turns something on the bottom of what could only be a strap on/ vibrator. And thrusts into me again setting a rethym. I move my hips along with her wrapping my legs around her hips, pulling it in deep to hit just the right spot. I roll her over with it still inside of me and ride the object she had on. She moans as I kiss her harder. And as we almost reach the limits I slide down on it one more time twisting my hips and I cry out panting and she cries out a few seconds later and we collapse on one another, still panting. “Will you go out with me?” she asked after she regained her breath and I answered with a single kiss. “After that how could I resists?”15
Author notes
i know this makes me kind of look like a slut and all but you have to understand i did have a few drinks in me at the time. but this was how i got my first girlfriend, my first lover and the first/only girl i ever fell in love with. i'm sorry it is rather poorly writen and not every good at all. but please comment. thanks, tempest
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Comments
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Ahh nope lol It dun make you look like a slut... in my opinion *shrugs* Steamy write! I enjoyed it
Keep it up lol I'll keep reading
~Amy
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I love the story and I got my first girlfriend in almost the same way.
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That was an amazing story. You totally wowed me and I'm not exactly one for erotica. Great job and you should keep writing because you are far from poor with your writing skills
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Knowing that this was true made it even better. Wow... Well-written piece. I loved the humor at the end. I think that the last sentence should be "After this, how could I resist?" instead of “After the how could I resists?” I don't know, just makes more sense to me. Good job!
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Really sexy write, very hot. Very arousing, on the erotometer.
Thanks.
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Glass of water? Try a good two hour freezing cold shower! Wow...I may think of something else to say later, but...geez, lucky you...
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whoa this is hott!! and it is mighty fine, i love a good woman.keep it up....b3l
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don't be ashamed at all about this piece. the prompt asked for a description of your first experience and that's exactly what you wrote. nothing at all wrong with that. you may want to go back and fix the spelling errors. for me personally, i had to stop and try to puzzle them out before i could continue the story. you did a nice job with the story itself though. you stayed on topic and told it in a clear and concise way and used details very effectively. i like the story itself very much though...definitely sexy...later dayz...
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well thanks for the comment. i have very poor spelling. and i dont know how she got the thing to work lol she got a strap on and some how conected a vibe to it so that while she gave the girl pleasure she got some her self. its very strange but lots of fun. lol. i'm glad you enjoyed it
i was still all should i have entered that after i did cause it was the first time i ever wrote something like that. (as my spelling shows and how i confused you also shows that. lol) but yeah at least you thought it was good. i'm still all i can't believe i wrote that. thanks again for the comment, and sorry for confusing you. -tempest
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envious ;)
I need a glass of water lol, that was a great story, I can't see how you would think it was poorly written, it started off with humor and ended with humor. Thats a wow story, everything was well written. The only thing is that thrust was mispelled a couple of times, but other wise than that it was great. I was a bit confused, did the black thing go into the other girl too, or just one? Thats some first experience, lol, nice job, dont feel slutty
, and dont think it was poorly written, it wasn't. Thanks for entering!!!
Iris


