Jason was now becoming more deranged1
with Nadia2
he actually believed she was his girlfriend3
his ill manned fantasies seem to be getting the best of him4
Jason was so fixed on this girl that he conned his way into her life5
not only did he hack into her computer to learn about her,6
but he moved in her complex,7
tapped her phone, went through her trash,8
called her9
followed her10
and now he was going to get a job where she went to school.11
he also became on of her regular customer's at her place of work.12
next thing you know, he'll be at the door' trying to sell her car insurance.13
Jason was now plotting a way to work himself into Nadia's somewhat fascinating life. His mind raced with so many ways on how to approach her.14
trying to work an angle with her, but then again Nadia was a smart girl, would she see right through his fortay.15
Today is the day Jason will meet face to face with his victim...16
... While shopping at the grocery store, watching Nadia shop he decided to finally bump into her on accident. She was reaching for some shampoo, when he pretended to run right into her and drop all his thing he had accumulated, in his hands. Jason said, "my bad I should of been paying attention to where I was going, by the way my name is Jason. Nadia looks at him and says " it's OK, I do it all the time, I am Nadia, can I help you pick up your stuff. She bends over to pick up his soap, noodles and magazine he had dropped. "You read URB, that is a great magazine."17
she says now Jason begins his small talk with Nadia, telling her his age, how he just moved down her from some other state, how he knows no one, and he lives in this crappy apartment complex, but the rent is cheap, so he can't really complain. Nadia says " no way I live in that complex too, were are probably neighbors or something. Jason proceeds to tell her his apartment number, Nadia is amazed he lives right across the way from her, she tells him, how she doesn't really talk with her neighbors or try to get to know them since she is hardly there, and her schedule is so busy. 18
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A bit different to your more erotic stuff.
It has proven to me that you don't just write about sex sex sex. (Which is not such a bad thing anyway). I must admit I found this story really interesting. -
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i have been writing here at this site since 03...i have a bunch of differnet thingsi have writtn, I mainly wirh naughty stuff. but i write other things as well. u would have to look and go thru my poems, its not all erotica. I have some other forms of poetry i was experimenting with... and other things i have written about some of them my views of certain things in society.
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coool, back to the stalker. this was another good installment. almost makes me glad I got rid of the one that was interested in me.
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That's really creepy. And it's even creepier how it really could happen. To anyone.
But I'm thinkin that you might want to make this a regular story, not a screenplay, because it isn't written in screenplay format. Just a thought.
Peace
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still getting creeeeeeepier
Eesh this is getting pretty creepy.
Once again, though, I am obligated to admit that this isn't exactly a screenplay.
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That....SOB! If this was a movie or something...I would be yelling at the girl: "No, he's the freak!!! He's insane!!!" I'm trying to patiently wait for the more...Excellent job!
Kamilah
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doo doo doo
the last bits were kinda run on, but, good nonetheless
as always, im anxiously awaiting more!
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I am looking forward to reading the next part to see where this leads.
Ann
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