The boys minds eye opened. There were slowly developing pieces. The details of things restoring to a dense resolution. One billion pixels per square inch. That's why this kid Jerry had such huge and ridiculous eyes. 1
"Hey there. His head has fucking microphones for eyes.", School memories.2
He never explained. He knew better. He wasn't allowed to have any confrontations. No kid ever actually pushed him. They knew the consequences. Parents complained to the school and his parents always magically knew. Then he knew.3
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Maybe I'm explaining instead of knowing. But I am only an egg. And am tenuous at story writing. At best.
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Thanks for the input. Unfortunately all I have the ability to flesh out is small neat ideas, or small interesting people. I need to start writing and quit complaining.
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Neurosine: interesting concept: what's it like to have optical implants for eyes - the plot could be developed into a what-if. What if a boy who was blind returns to school with optical implants. I have some genetics-gone-wrong pieces in the hopper.
~~~ ed ~~~
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