I gave her flowers, I died.
The plumber found the victim's body.
The earth exploded, nice going Johnny.
I went blind at Jimmy's house.
Jim, Agent Maxwell is the bomb!
The plastic people must all die.
We left England to find Joey.
My missing keys landed on Saturn.
A contest entry
- Six Word Stories by Delfishie.
175 points, ended April 30, 2007, 36 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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These are really cool!! Very nicely written. My favorite is "The plumber found the victim's body"... that would be a cool short story to write!
Great job,
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ohh wow iagree with him points down
good job with these good job to you and good luck in the contest im sure you will do well I only did 2six word storys but damn you did very well good job and god bless
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I really like how creative these are! I like all of them. I like the sci-fi bent and the weirdness and the possible stories they all could become.
Great job.
Note of criticism:
The punctuation could have used some work. Like, "The earth exploded, nice going Johnny." would have been more effective if you'd punctuated it like this:
"The earth exploded. Nice going, Johnny." Mostly because they are two sentences and when addressing someone, you should add a comma.
I really enjoyed these. Great job!
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