This story is something sweet and simple. It's my favorite not only because I like the story, but because it evokes the most emotions in others.
This was really, really cute, but you should really extend it. You've got a great idea for a story going here, but with only two hundred words we hardly had enough time to meet the characters. Extending this would give you a chance to better get the characters across. Let us truly meet them. Let us see how they act and what their history together is in depth. You've got a great idea here, but you need to add in more details so there will be a better emotional connection to the reader. Wonderful imagery, though. You've got a really good idea here so you should just take what you have and give us more.
Hope this helped.