I知 sorry it had to happen,
I知 sorry it couldn't be fixed
I知 sorry you feel this way
And had to do what you did.
I hope that you can be happy,
I hope that it will work out
I hope that things can be fixed
And that you will be okay.
I知 sorry that all dreams were lost
I知 sorry that you lost all hope
I知 sorry that you didn稚 believe
And that you had to leave
Thank you for what you have given us,
Thank you for trying hard,
Thank you for being there,
And for everything you have ever done.
Author notes
You asked and this is what i came up with...sorry its not good.
A contest entry
- poetry contest, the best poems you ever written by bedovich.
350 points, ended April 29, 2007, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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marvelous write
it is gooooooooooooooddddddd. as everything I have read of your is, I hope you one day get more self confidence and less problems.
*hugs the author*
=)
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this is good! not great but good! and that's still positive. it sounds like this was written to a friend. and well to put it easily i love it! i loved the last stanza,
the 3rd stanza not so great but thats okay. i still love it -
This WAS god.
I loved the repeation of the, 'I'm sorry'. This was very emotionally packed. -
I have been having a flick through and i have noticed ur a very passionate person, ur a true artist!!
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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wow thanks
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Hi Lizzy, I don't know why I never got to see this... but it just held so much emotion that I find myself feeling over and over again
Maybe it's because in life, we really need to say goodbye to some people.. because there are just meant to touch us for that brief period that we know them.. that or I am just being realistic now, compared to my usual "optimism" ^_^
Thank you for sharing this
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This is very good, with great emorion and great writing! =)
beginning: 4, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 4, characters: 5.
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wow
amazing , exceptional , fantastic those words can only describe this piece
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oh wow I agree with all the comments this was very good i fell into this poem it was amzaing great job and keep up the great work you will go very far in life with your writing I just loved it good job
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wow great job your flow was good and you showed some emotion's in this i liked the part were u said thanks for being there and everything u have done now is was good great job
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narutofanfan94
that was good. keep it up -
I loved this...so good.
I think that it'd be a wonderful song...x.x
Lovely poem.
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This was good em, you entered Great jobby "hun"
Ebony.
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This was really good, it had great flow...
Keep up the good work
Luv MDH xoxo
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hun thanksssss
thanks for entering the contest hun i loved your poem alotssssssss
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