6 Words

Is everything okay? Richard? Haily? Guys?

I think I broke it... shit.

"I met another person... a woman."

Echoes rang out. The silencer failed.

"Pull your parachute quick, before you-"

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  • Delfishie
    April 17, 2007
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    neat

    Very dark. Very mysterious. I like how there are unanswered questions to almost all of them - how they all could be starting stories.

    Great job.


    • April 17, 2007
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      Thanks!

      I appreciate that. I was going for a "What happens next?" feel, rather than a whole story in six words. Think of them all as "Part I" to something greater.