In The Huddle

The coach says "lets go team." Then we run out to the Field. I look the other team in the eye their roaring to go. I look in the stands to see my dad cheering me on. I go to tackle and succeed. It's half time that means time for a brake. Second half I sit out, but that's okay. Our team has the ball and we are ahead. The coach calls a time out. "Okay team we have five minutes left. Tori your gonna be  line backer. Don't mess up. If we make this we win." We pile back on to the field. Why did coach make this design. I'm defense not offense. Look there's the ball flying at me. I see my teammates block. The ball lands in my hands. I run and dart threw the other team. Then I see him the guy I didn't want to face. The man who talks to me in my dreams. My crush who plays for the opposing team. I run to the left and...... TOUCH DOWN!!!!!!! We won all because of me and the team. They raise me up on their shoulders and chant my name. I take off my helmet and he sees who I am. After the game we'll hook up and we'll laugh about how I kicked his but at the game.1

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