1. Don’t catch her when she falls.
2. Push the pain aside, and live.
3. Break her heart. I’ll break you.
4. He turned her into that monster.
5. Touch me again. I’ll kill you.
6. You swore you wouldn’t lie again
7. Smart thinking. Now we’re all dead!
8. You can’t see me…can you?
9. Love’s blind, have I been blinded?
10. Silly girl, boys only break you.
11. You’re wrong, I can do this.
12. If you love me, dont cut.
13. I said no, I really did.
14. Words mean nothing when you’re deaf.
15. Your death will be here tomorrow.
16. Miss Harris? Jude’s gone, she left.
17. Dark is scary? Not to me.
18. She was welcomed with open arms.
19. Can you feel me at all?
20. If you know me…then why?
21. I’m a playboy bunny, so what?
22. Love is only pain from men.
23. Men: Psychotic fools who know nothing.
24. My mother always cared, why now?
25. They said there was a cure.
26. You will not force me again.
27. I am not marrying him, daddy!
28. Sweetheart, you’re falling over, get up!
29. No, don’t leave me, wake up!
30. You fought him all day, right?
31. Abuse is not the answer, Charles.
32. Diaries of mad black women. Hide.
33. Baby, that doesn’t mean you’re pregnant.
34. Oh, my, I know this place!
35. Look me in the eyes, okay?
36. Water is good for you, drink.
37. Live without me, I hate you.
38. He still makes her giddy inside.
39. It doesn’t matter what they think.
40. Kiss me, I’m your Irish girl!
41. Stay here, do not move, alright?
42. He isn’t here…he never showed.
43. Babies…they kill. I’m not joking!
44. First come, first serve. Go home.
45. You killed your unborn child? Disgusting.
46. How’d she fall? Oh my god…
47. He’s gone forever. It’s my fault!
48. She rests against his gravestone, crying.
49. Didn’t I tell you? Go away!
50. They cried their crimson tears together.
Author notes
Um...yeah. I needed to write something so...there it is.
A contest entry
- Six Word Stories by Delfishie.
175 points, ended April 30, 2007, 36 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Good job!
Well, well...I see that you were in a dark mood when you wrote these...but I love them anyway. Here are my faves:
3. Break her heart. I’ll break you.
7. Smart thinking. Now we’re all dead!
8. You can’t see me…can you?
11. You’re wrong, I can do this.
14. Words mean nothing when you’re deaf.
21. I’m a playboy bunny, so what?
27. I am not marrying him, daddy!
29. No, don’t leave me, wake up!
45. You killed your unborn child? Disgusting.
48. She rests against his gravestone, crying.
50. They cried their crimson tears together.
My favorite has to be number 14. It really made me go: Yeah. Wow. That makes a lot of sense.
I think that a lot of these would make interesting first lines for stories...so, by all means, consider that.
Good luck in the contest!!!
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I've read like almost all the entries to that contest and they all amuse me to no end... Well you're don't amuse me cause they are too...dark but perhaps the concept still does...Good job
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I hate numbers so I'll hate you for 2 minutes while I type these
These are the stuff that I reall loved
1-6, 9 10,
14
27
29
37
48
50
BUT my ultimate favorite has to be 20
If you knew me... then why???
Why has so many meanings.. so many hidden questions, so many implications... and the lines speaks of so many things, could speak of.. everything?
You are inspired, dear
Maybe one time, I'd ask your permission and use one of these in my future work
I'll tell the readers where I got the quote from, don't worry 
*will tell them it's gaby's greatness*!!!!!!!!!
THANK YOU for sharing this with us
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oh wow
These are so incredibly dark. So much so that even the more 'positive' ones seem like you wrote them sarcastically, like "Kiss me, I'm your Irish girl." I read that as bitter sarcasm, although I'm not sure if that's how you intended it to be interpreted.
Very effective. Very neat entries.
Favorite bits:
42. He isn’t here…he never showed.
and...
1. Don’t catch her when she falls.
Both would make GREAT first lines of a story.
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This was good, you have some nice ones here and did a better job then me. Good luck these were really good.
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niceeeeeeeeee
out of desperation into creation and this one goes right into my bookmark
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