When I was just a child of only four my parents decided they
did not want me or my brother around so they decided to give us up
for adoption. We were so little that we did not know what the
people were doing when they came to our house and picked us up. I
thought that we were just going on a little trip but later on I
figured out that it was a trip just not a trip that I would enjoy.
Me and my brother were carried hundreds of miles away to a
little town in Tennessee where we were dropped off at a place where
foster kids went to.
When we arrived at the place they called the Department of
something or another a couple were there waiting on us for some odd
reason. We soon came to find out that was the people that would be
taking care of us for the rest of our lives.
At first we did not like the idea of meeting new people let
alone getting into a car with complete strangers. With all of the
commotion me and my brother were getting pretty scared. It took a
while for us to be able to get into the backseat of a strangers
car. When we got in the doors closed and we looked out of the
window into the faces of our parents who arrived shortly after we
did with our younger siblings. As we looked they looked sad and
our mother was crying my dad just had the look of disappointment
upon his face.
After the night we were taken to a different home we never saw
our parents again. We did not even hear the sound of their voice.
About 10 years after we were put into foster care we were
eventually adopted by the same people who were there waiting on us.
Even after all that has went on I still want to meet my
parents and find them to find out why they could not keep us and
why the gave me and my brother up. Amongst all of the things that
happened we still love our parents and care for them.
The end...
A contest entry
- Story of Abuse TRUE by happypurplepumpkin.
200 points, ended May 15, 2007, 2 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Read Me today and tell me what you think
Comments
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oh and as to the contest well this is not exactly abuse but I guess it sabuse in the way that its emotional abuse well its good anyway you will do well
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oh wow this is really good I LOVE it as to grammatical errors it has a few but its good i like it
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Wow! This was good. Wonderfully written. I could never imagine something like this. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. God Bless!
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This story is relaxing and verry meanfull .Keep the good work up and keep writing,
beginning: 1, plot: 1, ending: 2, dialog: 1, characters: 3.


