Me

When I was just a child of only four my parents decided they

did not want me or my brother around so they decided to give us up

for adoption. We were so little that we did not know what the

people were doing when they came to our house and picked us up. I

thought that we were just going on a little trip but later on I

figured out that it was a trip just not a trip that I would enjoy.

Me and my brother were carried hundreds of miles away to a

little town in Tennessee where we were dropped off at a place where

foster kids went to.

When we arrived at the place they called the Department of

something or another a couple were there waiting on us for some odd

reason. We soon came to find out that was the people that would be

taking care of us for the rest of our lives.

At first we did not like the idea of meeting new people let

alone getting into a car with complete strangers. With all of the

commotion me and my brother were getting pretty scared. It took a

while for us to be able to get into the backseat of a strangers

car. When we got in the doors closed and we looked out of the

window into the faces of our parents who arrived shortly after we

did with our younger siblings. As we looked they looked sad and

our mother was crying my dad just had the look of disappointment

upon his face.

After the night we were taken to a different home we never saw

our parents again. We did not even hear the sound of their voice.

About 10 years after we were put into foster care we were

eventually adopted by the same people who were there waiting on us.

Even after all that has went on I still want to meet my

parents and find them to find out why they could not keep us and

why the gave me and my brother up. Amongst all of the things that

happened we still love our parents and care for them.

The end...

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Comments

  • happypurplepumpkin
    May 15, 2007

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    oh and as to the contest well this is not exactly abuse but I guess it sabuse in the way that its emotional abuse well its good anyway you will do well

  • happypurplepumpkin
    May 15, 2007
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    oh wow this is really good I LOVE it as to grammatical errors it has a few but its good i like it


  • Mel-the-Believer
    April 19, 2007

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    Wow! This was good. Wonderfully written. I could never imagine something like this. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. God Bless!


  • david18232
    April 16, 2007
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    This story is relaxing and verry meanfull .Keep the good work up and keep writing,

    beginning: 1, plot: 1, ending: 2, dialog: 1, characters: 3.