"Why fight?" "For you and America."
Life's been better since she died.
Blood's always been there, Sir, promise.
A contest entry
- Six Word Stories by Delfishie.
175 points, ended April 30, 2007, 36 entries
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I did one of these, unfortunately I can't find it! >
number 2 sounds terrible, but there's sometimes truth in that. It's sad to admit, but sometimes someone's death is for the better.
I like the last bit because it makes me think of the people who say, "I bleed red, just the same as you," indicating that they shouldn't be discriminated against because we're all essentially the same. -
this is definitely unlike anything i've seen. its good
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Ohh I liked these.
The second one was my fav. though. It was a bit dark...which is why I like it.
Good job though, good luck too!
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DrBoomBoom
I really like all three. Number two is a real mystery, so far it's my favorite.
language: 5.
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I like the first and the third...the second one's kinda confusing
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neat
The last two stories were much better than the first, but I liked all of them. I think the reason why some strike me as better than others is because of the *potential* stories those 6 words could become.
Particularly the last one - Ah, what stories a blood stain could start! Especially an *old* one. What caused it? Who made it? Did they die? Was anyone ever punished for the injury?
Very good indeed.
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