Squished bunny with a massive mallet.
A contest entry
- Six Word Stories by Delfishie.
175 points, ended April 30, 2007, 36 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Poor bunny. That's so sad. . . .so very very sad. the mallet is now all gut covered and junk too.
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Y-You killed the bunny? Well that's not nice!!! Besides who said you get to kill anything! I am the Kitty of Death (or so says teh Nono).
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heh
You have a great grasp of imagery (*snickers uncontrollably*). Very cute sentence.
DEAD TO BUNNIES! YAH!
That is all. Good luck in the contest! -
This made me laugh so much. It was very comical to me. Poor squishy bunny.
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Very deep
You manage to squish so much into such a short story. You must have used the massive mallet to flatten it down to the basics. But I have to ask: was the bunny squished BY the massive mallet? Some people might assume that, but the actual context only states that the squished bunny HAS the mallet. Perhaps it was a suicide squishing. Or perhaps he was born with a genetic disorder that makes him look squished, and now he hits people with a mallet to release his anger at his condition.
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You have a penchant for animals.. and killing them with weird things
since you like anime, have you ever watched Ranma 1/2? This character called Akane gets this massive mallet out of nowhere and just hits people with it haha! Anyway, no more squishing bunnies next time x.x but sadly, methinks this is worth stretching!!!! so yeah, continue this.. and then convert to squishing bugs! okay?
Thanks for sharing this!!!!! ^_^
Gluck with the contest!
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No I haven't
Sadly I haven't but I do love anime, and I have heard very good things about Ranma 1/2.
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