My dreams are mine

My dreams are mine you can't have them

Leave me in this day take your's away

Hope and dreams is all I have in my way

So leave me alone as I stay to play

Running in feilds with flowers

Dreaming of you to be in my area

So you can play with I

This is my dream do you like what you see

My dreams are yours too if you want to

Come with me

I will love you forever

and never let you go









































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































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  • bedovich
    April 16, 2007

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    GREAT WORK

    SO SHORT BUT VERY EXPRESSIVE. POETRY IS THIS SAYING MUCH IN FEW WORDSd I CAN READ THE SILENT WORDS WITHIN THE LINES