Nighttime Adventure

1

~2

The Wind3

So very cold, 4

as I step from the balcony that over looks the sea.5

~6

The Sea7

The sea glitters with light,8

it is night. 9

The Moon shines down,10

and exposes all.11

~12

Not Alone13

I realize,14

as I step away from the balcony,15

I am not alone.16

Straining my eyes to see farther,17

I see a figure,18

I call out to him,19

he advances towards me.20

~21

I Pray22

I Pray,23

as my heart beats faster,24

'who are you?' I ask,25

as he stands in front of me. 26

~27

The Answer28

He nods as if to say 'hello',29

and taking me by the hand,30

he helps me climb down from the balcony.31

~32

I Leave33

I leave,34

with him by my side,35

his hand in mine,36

and we whisper 'Goodbye'37

Author notes

Just sorta something I came up with.

A fantasy of someone taking me far far away!!! Maybe someone like...DAN! hehehe


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  • FuriousAngel
    June 12, 2004
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    Thanx you

  • SuperSheep
    June 12, 2004
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    Great

    I really loved your style of writing and the idea behind your story.