A very nice shade of black



Twenty CCs of intravenous chocolate, stat.

Don’t make me kill you please.

Start screaming and I’ll stop helping.

Doctors to the OR; wondrous sound.

Due before your funeral celebration.

Author notes

I didn't mean for these to be so dark. I guess I just have a dark mind. I actually made this less dark before submitting it.

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  • Mel-the-Believer
    April 16, 2007

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    These were awsome. I think my favorites were the last three. Those were awsome. Dark, but good. Great job. Good luck in the contest. God Bless!


  • Andrew Timothy
    April 16, 2007
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    "Doctors to the OR; wondrous sound"

    That's awesome


  • Delfishie
    April 16, 2007

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    wow

    I really like ALL of these. I LOVE dark stories (if they're done right) and all of these bits would make EXCELLENT plots for longer stories.

    "Start screaming and I’ll stop helping." in particular. Damn. What in the world could that mean? Why would they stop helping someone who is fighting the urge to scream?

    Oh, so many possibilities!

    Great great job with this. Very enjoyable.