1.Sixth sense made first five jealous.
2.Majesty, Armageddon will be late today!
3.Unstoppable force meets an uncaring dude.
4.Sixty seven sultans suddenly swapped swords.
Author notes
It was fun.
A contest entry
- Six Word Stories by Delfishie.
175 points, ended April 30, 2007, 36 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow... #3 reminded me so much of a story I have wanted to write for forever. And you captured it in six words! Wow...
#2 was also quite intersting. Sounds like a faceless minion speaking to the EEEEEVIL Overlord... (If you have never read the "Evil Overlord List, look it up. It is hysterical!)
Great job! These were awesome!
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Wow, I love number four! Every word starts with 'S' and it actually makes sense.... quite a feat! (I also like number two a lot.)
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My favorite would have to be number one as as well. Number three was good to, it said so much in so few words. Good luck.
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Hah!
I loved number one!
"1.Sixth sense made first five jealous."
BWAHAHAHAHAHA! I can just imagine the conversations between the senses:
Smell: God! Psychic Powers brags *all* the time!
Hearing: Totally. I'm so sick of him.
Sight: (*timidly*) Although it is kinda cool...
Smell: Shut UP, Sight! Don't let it hear you compliment it! It'll never shut up!
Psychic Powers: I don't NEED to hear you, other senses! I have ESP! BWAHAHAHAH!
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Um. Yeah. I think I've thought waaaayyyy too much about this. -
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Thanks! People's tastes are so different...my favorite still is #3.
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I like number two alot and although the other four didn't strike me too much, the 2nd justifies the others.
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Thanks! Personally, I liked #3 more...I am not too proud about #1 and #4.
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