What harm could come of it?
Mr. and Mrs. White? We're sorry.
But she said she loved me.
Have you seen him? Dog gone.
A contest entry
- Six Word Stories by Delfishie.
175 points, ended April 30, 2007, 36 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I only see four lines here, but each of them speak so loudly, and even transcends their lengths... I understand why you got the honorable award
congratulations! 
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Oooh. I like them all. Usually there are one or two that are sort of "meh" but these were all good. I likies way mucho. The first two especially.
Great job! (I believe that "dog gone" is actually spelled "doggone" but you were going for six words. Unless you actually mean "the dog is gone" which would make sense considering the context "have you seen him?" Clever...)
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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hey!
These are all very clever. I'm surprised. Normally in a bunch of stories, there are a couple duds, but these were all very good.
Of course it helps that you have only four of them, instead of fifty. *grins*
Great job. I can see the potential stories in them all.
Poor Mr. and Mrs. White!
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