1. Is it love? That's some question.
2. Tell stories that make me hate.
3. You and me. Cactus in Alaska.
4. Because I will never deserve me.
5. Rivers. Of tears. A little relief.
7. Tried to hit. But missed you.
8. Change 'I wish' for 'I will'.
9. Escape, freedom is not a lie.
10. Dream life. Then live your dream.
11. Forever. It does have a limit.
12. I miss you. Never. Ever. Forever.
13. Brilliant questions: worthless. Stupid answers: priceless.
14. Simple questions: illusion. Simple answers: hurt.
15. Big brother. Never become. Our father.
16. Big sister. Keep mother's. Loving hands.
17. It wasn't his fault. Neither mine.
18. Mum. The window broke. Wasn't me.
19. Daddy. I broke your window. *bunny*.
20. Spring. Ants tickle. Birds sing softly.
21. Summer turns it's back too soon.
22. Trees lose leaves. I lose sanity.
23. Winter takes too long. Time freezes.
24. Spring again. Those damn ants again.
25. Dreams for sale: sweet or terrifying? 2
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Great contest! I never heard of this, but I absolutely love it! It's harder than you think really. I know, this is pretty much, but I really liked this, so I just couldn't stop ... Well, I hope this is what you meant. I may add some more... just check...
Love Lily
A contest entry
- Six Word Stories by Delfishie.
175 points, ended April 30, 2007, 36 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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HaHA! Mum. The window broke. Wasn't me...
Great job. You had some serious, inspiring lines, mixed with a healthy dose of insane funniness... *not sure if that is word*
Anyhoo, great job!
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 4.
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I found some of these very inspirational, I liked them all, I could not pick a favorite
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Thank you!
Thank you so much for commenting! Nice to hear that you liked it!
Love Lily
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nice
Favorite bits:
3. You and me. Cactus in Alaska.
8. Change 'I wish' for 'I will'.
15. Big brother. Never become. Our father.
Spelling note:
The plural of "leaf" is "leaves".
I really enjoyed reading this. One of the things I'm finding pleasantly surprising about this contest is how people aren't submitting sci-fi or fantasy 6 word stories, but romance and life-in-general stories. It's neat how people interprete the contest and I really like reading the different responses.
You did a great job with this. There were several very clever ones mixed in there that I liked. Good job!
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