Yes, there are a lot of strange grammatical errors in this, but I wrote this to be spoken, not read neccesarily, thus the ands in the beginning of the sentances. This is also a short story which I cut down for the sake of this contest, and I felt that this was acceptable entry because it is all about trying to live without the person who you dependent on? About things that you never got to say--feelings you never got to show. I don't know if this fits your contest or not. I hope it does. The writing is not tight, because the speaker is not a writer. He is supposed to be a little dumb and have no good way of explaining himself.
I don't know if I would call this my favorite, but the idea and image behind this story always seemed so powerful that I became compelled to write it. It's unfortunate to me that this version is such a hack, because locked on a computer I can't retrieve it from is a far better, more complete telling. This also is one of the only finished stories I have on the site, so I hope you like it.