Pleasures of the heart
fulfilled by the beauty of the soul
foliage of a tree
gently sway across the sea
seeds buried in the ground
cannot be found
hearts burning with flames
like showers of rain playing games
sweet gentle breeze
give me the hearts dream
come in from the dark
leaving the waves behind to scream.
Author notes
This is probly not gonna make sense to neone but if u understand it yay u!!!
A contest entry
- Another all poems (I love poems) by jtnbuck.
125 points, ended April 16, 2007, 16 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Nature's Beauty At Its Best by KingWolf.
525 points, ended May 6, 2007, 9 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very good poem even though I did not understand it, it flowed nicely. Thank you for entering the contest and good luck.
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tnx, swwy u didnt understand it though
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I liked it although i did not understand it
well done and good luck
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thnx
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i liked it great job
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Thanks
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gerg
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I knew it!
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u kno nothing
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Oh dahling! YOU ARE SO TALENTED!! THIS POEM MAKES ME SWOON WITH ITS BEAUTY AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
its very pertifull. It sounds kinda familiar though. hmmmmmm...
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u kinda read this on allpoetry before..
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i hate u. u write to good
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Hate u too...tnx
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beep! BOB DAMMIT!
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BEEP it
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oh my bob!!
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wow It made sence to me I loved it good job and keep up the good work I did enjoy reading this very much you have a nice way of writing and I like it hope you do well in my contest
good luck and good job and god bless
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Thanks and im glad you understood it!!
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