She's been in there a long time, he thought. He'd gone to see what she was doing earlier, and he'd thought she was asleep until she'd opened her eyes and smiled at him, sinking further into the steaming water as her eyes drifted shut again.1
That had been at least an hour ago. Had she really fallen asleep in the jacuzzi this time? he wondered. Only one way to find out...2
He pushed open the bathroom door to find her in much the same position she'd been in earlier: her arms spread on the tub behind her, her eyes closed, covered in steamy bubbles that barely revealed a hint of cleavage where they stopped on her chest. Her hair was pulled up in a clip with loose, damp tendrils falling around her face. The effect was very sensual.3
Her eyes opened to stare up at him in bold invitation. "I was wondering if you'd ever come around," she purred in that sexy voice of hers.4
Before his astonished eyes, she spread the bubbles with her hands, revealing her nakedness beneath the water's surface. Slinking down further on her tail bone, she spread her legs, hooking one over each side of the big tub, leaving her open to his gaze. 5
His heart rate skyrocketed, and he was having trouble breathing. God, she was sexy! And his, he reminded himself...6
She lifted one eyebrow in question, a seductive smile making its way slowly to her full lips. "Are you comin'?" she asked softly, and he could hear the smile in her voice.7
"Not yet," he quipped, and her smile grew as she watched him undress in 10 seconds flat. 8
"That eager, huh?" she teased as he practically dived into the open space between her legs. 9
"You have no idea," he replied in a tortured tone that made her laugh. 10
Her laughter soon faded into a gasp as he cupped both hands around her bottom, lifting her hips to meet his eager mouth. She had to hold on to the soap dish to keep from sliding under the water, which she would have laughed at in any other situation. 11
As she moaned in pleasure at the little dance his tongue was doing between her thighs, she swiped one hand over a panel of the steamy mirrors that covered three sides of the tub, taking in the reflection of herself as he brought her closer and closer to orgasm: her tousled hair, her dilated eyes and flushed face, her lips swollen from biting them in an attempt to keep from crying out. 12
And him...she could see him, his head bent over her, watching her face with those liquid blue eyes of his while his tongue did devilish things to her. She looked back to meet his eyes, hers growing wider as his tongue speared deep inside her and his teeth scraped her clit, pushing her over the edge to completion. Still, he didn't stop, sucking water and her body's moisture from her soft pink petals. 13
He ran his tongue the length of her crease several times, the thumbs of the hands that still cupped her firm cheeks reaching to help, pressing inside her while his mouth worked magic until she gave herself over to abandon once again. She screamed his name in ecstasy, moaning and panting until she was completely spent. 14
Author notes
ahhhh....the joy of multiple orgasms....
LOL.
The ultimate bubble bath fantasy, huh? Look for part II, which I will be posting soon.
What did you think? Please comment!
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oooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh if part one got me pumped up then part 2 should blow me away
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this was good....I like...no I loved it....I think i'm now fully inspired to continue writing my story and the erotic scene I was about to write but needed something to inspire me...but this was hot...I wish I had someone to take a bubble bath with right now....awesome write...keep it up....Luv Caz
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this is good. you should write another part to it...eh... thats kinda strange for me to say that...I read to much...damnit...anywho this is good. great job and keep writing.
Heather -
I think I'm going to take a bubble bath and wait for my sweetie to come home.Hot Stuff!
Rita -
This is very good.... I look forword to reading the next part so I shall add you. Thanks for sharing!
Kayla Dawn -
Steamy
I like the way you use bubbles as the sheets/veils to reveal the woman's body. This is great eroticia because it apelas to all of the sense sight, sound taste, smell, and touch. My favortie hotel in the woprld is an old 1920s establishment that still has the giant bathtubs with claw ffet excellt for two party bubble baths, candles, the works. -
I think you have made a fan in your erotica writing. I truly enjoyed that adventure, since it is the type of stuff I like to dabble in from time to time. I am sure part 2 will be as exciting. Sometimes I break mine up into parts as well (trying to capture the readers' intrigue).
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great
WOW! This was another great one! I would have to say that you do have a talent for erotica! LOL This was a great piece for imagery too! I loved it! Keep up the marvelous work!
Keep on writing! And
Keep on propering from past mistakes!
Your friend,
ashley -
Lol, it is a great read! I do love your work I must say... I so wanna try it now. Good writing.
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Very nice! Well written...and definitely erotic. I'm looking forward to part II.
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Thanks for your comment. I plan to add part II later tonight sometime. I hope this puts lots of ideas in everyone's heads. LOL. I know it put some in mine. Anyway, thanks again. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
~Miranda
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Sensually breathtaking
I'm not sure I can offer any critical advice for this one.
I would like to say that I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. It kinda made me want to experience the same bubblebath fantasy!
*adds to list of fantasies... hehe*
I was so drawn in by the work that I was already hoping to find part 2 available when I finished reading.
MMmmmm... sexy write.
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