The night was clear but cool as he led her out of the dance hall to the car park. A slight mist was riding in from the sea making an eerie scene.1
Taking her hands he drew them to his lips mumbling between kisses how beautiful she is, slowly kissing up her arms, savouring her soft, black skin, nibbling on her neck while filling his lungs with her delicious scent.2
Her giggles ring in his ears like angel’s laughter, whilst her voluptuous figure bumps and grinds against his.3
He moves his hands to touch her breasts whilst his lips roam freely over her mouth, teasing and nipping her soft fleshy lips.4
Her protests at him touching her in public although no one was around were weak and feeble, so he tried again… without success. However, judging by her movements he feels that her passion and need for him are growing stronger and she soon won’t resist him any more.5
Taking her hand he guides it to the front of his trousers where he shows her what she is doing to him… evident by the rock hard bulge, pulsing at the zipper of his trousers.6
She gasps in pleasure and a mysterious glint shows in her eyes while a huge smile forms on her lips. Lowering herself to her knees she fumbles with the fastener on his trousers until he is free, where she licks and sucks at his member before taking him full in her mouth.7
He groans with pleasure and wraps his fingers in her curly brown hair and pushes gently against her head encouraging her to take him deeper into her mouth.8
After a few moments he gets bored of this, finding that she is not to his satisfaction, so he pulls her up, raises her skirts and plunges his hand inside her panties finding her hot and wet. He slides first one finger, then another, into her juicy pussy while his free hand fondles for her breasts, finding her nipples standing to attention, waiting to be touched, sucked and toyed with.9
His growing need to feel himself inside her increases so he pushed her against the wall and enters her roughly from behind, thrusting hard into her, groaning loudly.10
He starts off slow but hard, and increases the pace, and fierceness of his lovemaking, their moans of ecstasy filling the air. Panting and groaning, his balls slapping against her ass, he fills her up with his seed.11
Turning away from her, he arranges his clothes, throws a tissue in her hand so she can clean herself up, opens the back door to the party and enters, looking for his next victim.12
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Men are much more patient and forgiving.I've often let a woman continue giving me head, despite her inabilities, just so that it will be a good learning experience.
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dun dun da...ahha...great write
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I'm not sure that bored was the right word to use, but I couldn't think of a more suitable word. See the thing is that she wasn't good at oral sex, and if one aint good at it then I would think the man gets bored. Me being a woman, I wouldn't know what he would feel, but I know that if the man aint good at something and I aint satisfied then I would get bored with it and want to move on to something else... but that's just me
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I did like this story, but was very confused. I find it very hard for a man not to be aroused by oral sex, but you say he got bored with it? Weird, but whatever. It was still good and like Muse said, it probably needs that one word changed, but good.
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You used really good description! i liked it. great write
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This was a good and also made me laugh.
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Interesting write. Good visualizations, I probably would have changed a few words here and there but there was a continuity to your choice of word use so it worked well. I'm not sure "victim" worked though only because she was all too willing. Perhaps "conquest", "prey", "subject"...overall, good job. Keep writing.
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