Affinity (Part II)

He sauntered over, that sexy walk of his drawing her eyes toward his hips, bringing back memories that heated her face. His smile was one of joy, not surprise. Hmmmm…she wondered what that meant, exactly, but she didn’t intend to stick around to find out. One look into those gorgeous, long lashed hazel eyes of his, and she knew she had to run like hell or get caught in his spell, and the latter was not her idea of intelligence. 1

Pushing aside the chair, which she was afraid she might get her feet wrapped around in her determination to get away, she hastily headed for the door to the kitchen. She didn’t make if far, though, and deep inside she’d known he would catch her…she’d wanted him to catch her, in all honesty. As much as he terrified her, he excited her too, on some elemental level she couldn’t explain. 2

His scent drifted over to tease her as she was flooded by warmth from the fingers that tightly held her wrist. She put up a token resistance, but she knew she couldn’t cause a scene here, though she wouldn’t fight him anyway. 3

“What do you want?” she whispered, not really sure where the words came from. It was obvious from the look in his eyes that he wanted her…4

He had the nerve to smile. “It’s nice to see you again, too,” he offered wryly.5

“Yeah, yeah, yeah…whatever. I asked you a question. What are you doing here?” she asked, a little more confidently. After all, they were on her turf, now. She was the one calling the shots.6

“I’m doing great. Thanks for asking. How have you been?” he said, his voice mocking her discomposure. 7

“Will you stop, damn it?” she hissed, leaning a little closer as she lowered her voice. 8

“If you think you can be civil, I guess I can manage being nice.”9

“Awww…you’ve just so sweet, Cade. I’d forgotten that about you, you know? But you haven’t changed a bit. You’ve still got to be the most wonderful person who ever walked this planet,” she simpered, her eyes filled with mock sincerity.10

“Yeah? I guess Nikki rubbed off on you and turned you into a smart-ass, too, huh?” he asked sweetly.11

“She taught me a few things I’ll need to get by in this world,” she corrected. Finally, she sighed. “Will you just tell me what you want? I have work to do, and my husband will be here soon.” Her tone was syrupy-sweet, and she smiled as she watched emotion flicker through his remote eyes.12

“Yeah, I heard about him. He got you working with the hired help?” 13

“No, I choose to work. Now will you just ANSWER THE DAMN QUESTION?” she practically shrieked. 14

“Alright, alright. Just spare my eardrums, please,” he begged.15

She tapped her foot impatiently. She hoped he’d feed her some pretty lie, though she knew he wouldn’t. That wasn’t his style. He had many faults, but honesty wasn’t one of them. 16

“I got a job about an hour away, so Shane asked me to drive down since I haven’t seen him in a while, right? So I came down here, and I stayed in one of Nikki’s spare bedrooms. God, her house is huge. Why would one person need a house that big? She’s even got a guesthouse, ya know? I’m sure you do, though. After all, you’re still best friends, aren’t you?”17

“Get to the point,” she commanded.18

“Okay, okay… so I started thinking. It’s just like old times. Shane and Nik are together, better than before, it seems. All that’s missing is you and me.”19

“Hello, did you hear me? I’m married. What are you getting at?”20

He reached out and ran a finger down the side of her cheek. She brushed him off. “You don’t love him,” he stated, and she turned her head, refusing to admit the truth in his statement. “I’m not offering you the world, Kara. I’m not offering much of anything. If it doesn’t work out, we’ll walk away and you can go back to your wonderful marriage, I’ll go back to being single. I just want to see if we still have it, the way we used to.” 21

He smiled that charming smile, and she almost found it hard to refuse him. Somehow, she managed to stare coldly into those piercing eyes. “Is that all?” she asked haughtily.22

He looked a little taken aback by her abrupt change in attitude. “Yeah, that’s it.”23

“Good. Now get out of my restaurant. You’ve thrown your bait, but this fish isn’t biting,” she ground out between clenched teeth, sending her hair flying as she turned forcefully and walked away, leaving him staring at her back. 24

Author notes

This is part II. I know not a lot has happened up until this point, but don't worry, I'm getting there, slowly but surely. I'll probably post more tomorrow. Be sure to read the first part if you  haven't read it yet.

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  • M.J.
    June 22, 2004
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    Excellent Way to go!

    Great Job Nicole and keep it up for despite your error in spelling I really enjoyed this so like I said keep it up girl,
    I have a write for you and it's called Kennedy and it's about his assassination please check it out because I know you'll love it too.

  • MirandaNicole
    June 14, 2004
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    LOL. Well, I've been writing about these characters for years, so even though I don't tell the reader much about their personalities, I've had a very in-depth look at them and I didn't want to do anything out of character. Not only that, but the restaurant was busy when he confronted her. There is a part III, though, and I'm working on part IV, so if you would like a hint, I will eventually get to that. LOL. Anyway, thanks for your comment.

    ~Miranda


  • Angelindiskyz
    June 14, 2004
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    I really enjoyed this, I wasnt sure how you were gonna end it, but my dirty mind would actually have had them make passionate wild caveman style love on one of the tables in the restaurant, just pushing everything aside, dishes crashing to the floor, as he pulls her into him..she also should be wearing a skirt..just a suggestion..but great write! It flowed extremely well...clap, clap, clap..*clap*


  • Xx ALEiA xX
    June 12, 2004
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    niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice

    Beautifully written. I agree with Ryan. It's very real and definatly not a fantasy or an unknown image. The way you wrote it made it seem like you had expeirienced this episode a few times. That's what I liked about it. Very nicely done.

    -Aleia-


  • Ryan Moore
    June 11, 2004
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    Kickass

    This is an excellent piece, it reminds me of my work, I like the way this poem is REAL to life and not imaginative like the other peoples' out there. Maybe you would like my writings. GOOD WRITE BABE, Ryan


  • TheBleedingSoul
    June 6, 2004
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    'didn’t make if far' Don't you mean 'didn't make IT far'? This is a good write, I love it. It's really good and I got into it. I hope you post more. Wonderful job.

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