Once upon a time and place, one grew so great
that the world seemed to shrink about him,
his voice like a thousand thunders, his anger darkened skies, and footprints defied the tides.1
~ One~2
It was something the size of a flea
got caught in the giant’s eyes.
It made his next step fall short
and then he began to stagger.3
He rubbed his eyes until they teared
and then they were red in anger;
still he stumbled, this giant of all.
He could not true his course.4
And so he stepped into a puddle
and the water flew into his face.
The water eased the redness of his eyes
then the dirt in the water made it all worse.5
Now he staggered even more sternly
and began to teeter and rock.
The world around began to tremble:
oh, what if the giant falls upon us?6
And it happened that the Giant staggered and reeled
and blindly, by some chance, found a tree:
An ancient tree, all wooded wisdom,
a witness to the ages before giants or men.7
And the tree lent its strength, and the Giant calmed.
When he could once again see and clearly,
he bowed from his waist, and graciously thanked the tree.
The tree simply smiled, its face a weathered dream.8
The mighty giant learned a secret of the tiny flea.
He turns the pride of his victim on himself.
I did not heed my dire need,
from a fly in my eye was I nearly lost.9
And the Ancient One then did agree
the Giant carved upon the Tree:
Live humbly with greatness,
a gift for which much is owed.10
~Two~11
And there came a day when Ants sent an emissary12
to plead for peace in the world;13
So too did Honey Bees for the stress of life14
without peace had decimated their numbers.15
And so did they go to the palace of the Giant of All.16
He no longer had needs, the world was his Castle.17
Others seemed like unseen barely noticed life, huddled in18
corners away from his sight; shivering in the cold drafts19
he allowed for his comfort, sweltering in the furious heat20
burning from his many things of fire.21
And the Ancient Tree his fount of wisdom stood in a lost 22
corner of an untended acres, silence upon weathered lips and23
loneliness for want of attentive ears, knowledge hungry 24
eyes and the admiration of sage words; bare limbed in the 25
height of summer waiting for a season of an age gone by.26
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So they found the Giant in such a state, he was drunk with power.28
He had consumed all that was set before him by his Daughters29
and now he could not raise his head nor lift his eyes.30
In patience taught by needs, the Ant and the Honey Bee 31
stayed long and with the Daughters of the Giant. All32
could not awaken him for he was deeply lost33
in a wonderful sleep. Neither daughter,34
Beauty or Light, could stir him from his dreamy dream.35
So while in wait did Beauty and Light attend.36
Courtesy to guests did so please the Ant and the Bee,37
for the Daughters were so kind; bringing sweet nectar and rest.38
And rewarding, the Ant and the Bee taught them to fly.39
Delighted, alighted the Daughters flew and laughed40
never had they such joy, and flight was perfect.41
And they flew to their Father to show their42
pleasure and new wet wings.43
And the Giant in his dreamy dream44
felt the buzzing of a fly, near his eye45
and remembered a flea and how it had once ruined him;46
he angrily threw his giant hand, and his anger awakened him.47
And he opened his bleary eyes to the memory of his dream;48
but came awake into a nightmare, there, Beauty and Light49
all tears and broken wings. And the Giant wept, 50
through his bitter tears trying with his ungainly fingers,51
to repair the delicate wings.52
The Ant and the Honey Bee saw and together said:53
Perhaps now in the saltiest eye, 54
All can know that even the fly55
has love to give. Not to withstand56
the weight of his mighty hand57
but still imbued by Nature with worth58
and a place of value on this good green Earth.59
So exuent the Ant and the Honey Bee60
as Giant of All wept over the injury;61
the dimming of the Light to see62
and the unforeseen fall of Beauty.63
Author notes
Part one originall posted as "Giant"
on March 27, 2007. © PK, All rights reserved
A contest entry
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Comments
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Wonderfully done my friend. This is fantasy fantastic. I don't think I've an imagination like this and these are the writes I enjoy the most. Talking ants and bees. The rabbit and the hare. Little Mermaid. Aesop's fables. Wonderful! LOL Write on. One.
Dez

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Such a small thing, like dust, comparing to the size of the giant, made he see how life really is. Also made him appreciate the little things in life as well. How many lives have been changed by small facts, touches, unexpected happenings...
Your story has a very good moral in it. I like how it evolved.
Liked the introduction too


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thanks as great as a thousand thunders... i will let this one grow over time into a parable story maybe for a prose collection...thank you for your inspiration...h
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hmmmm
Interesting story/poem thingie. It was a bit hard to follow in places where I think you tried to write in an older style.
This was a very creative effort. I wasn't expecting a poem at all, let alone one with a moral at the end.
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Thank you Delfishie
ok the giant was a prose piece i will expand it into a full fledged story: a parable on power. The ant is a symbol for the results of war, and the bee is suddenly endangered allover the world, Why? dunno.
This was a dream and in my dream I was the drunken Giant...Thanks for reading...PK
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