The year is 2007, a part of the eighth grade class is in science class. They are awaiting the teacher's arrival and are under the supervision of an aid teacher; nothing is under control. The aid has to leave so she leaves a student whom she thinks she can trust in the head position. As she leaves total chaos grips the room.
"Hey James, throw that bag!" yelled a kid from across the room.
"Yeah, hold on! Give it here Jess!" the kid name James yelled back. He ripped the bag he was after out of the girl's hands.
"James! You pig give it back! James I'm gonna kill you!"
With out warning the girl who was left in charge let out a yell. "Sit down and be quiet!"
Everyone just looked at her and rolled their eyes. Going back to what they were doing. Yelling and hitting and throwing possessions around the room. A sudden scream of pain and anguish cut through all the noise in the room. Everyone turned to find James on the floor.
"Oh my god! James!"
*****
The flashing red and blue lights of the police car were barely seen in the bright sun light. The ten police officers that arrived ten minutes after they had been called just stood around the body of the teenage boy with dumbstruck looks on their faces. They all knew the troublesome boy and had gotten quite attached to him. His blubbering mother and sobbing father stood in the hall talking to the chief officer.
"Officer, what happened?" the mother managed to get out.
"Well," Chief Smaerk began. "We believe that he was either stabbed or perhaps shot."
"Um, Chief Smaerk? Could you come over here?" a young officer with pale green eyes and dark brown hair said.
"Sure, could you two excuse me?" the chief tried to say with smile, but failed miserably. ...to be continued
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Very good.
To be honest, I think this is the best piece of writing you've writen so far. Your other stories seem to jump around too much, but this one stayed on focus. It made it a lot better. Good job!
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