Must Kill You Before You Kill Me

I couldn’t get a real life
Or a person who I wanted to be with
That’s why I’m with you
And I have nothing to loose
I’m on the edge
I gonna die and that’s the only thing
That makes our relationship good

You give me a lifetime supply of misery
And then you try to love me
I say to you, “I’ll see you in hell”
I know you’ll just ruin that too
Like you ruin everything else

(Chorus)
You’re the misery in my life
So I must kill you before you kill me
I hope you understand but I don’t care
I’ll see you in hell

Because of you, everyone thinks I’m a disgrace
You made me joke
Well, guess what?
You’re the joke
And you’re going to be my homicide
My sweet homicide

I’ll stab you
I’ll pull the bloody knife out and then,
I’ll bury you
All of my problems will be over then
How do you like that?
Now, it’s the other way around

(Chorus)
You’re the misery in my life
So I must kill you before you kill me
I hope you understand but I don’t care
I’ll see you in hell

Author notes

This song may be used for my band that I'm in with my new boyfriend Eric. I play guitar that band and my bf Eric is the singer. We're kind of like a band that looks like Murderdolls & Wednesday 13. This is what the Murderdolls look like so it could give you an idea about what my band looks like; http://living_dead_doll.tripod.com/sitebuildercontent/sitebuilderpictures/dollscalendarpic.jpg

All of the members in my band are all guys expect for me and well, I think that our name sounds a bit strange.

I hoped the song was okay because I need to give it to Eric since he's the singer. If the song is strange, but it might supposed to be.

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  • Poison.
    September 11
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    Nice flow to it, huh? The title sounds inviting. Don't ask me why.


  • QueenWolf
    May 10, 2007

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    not my cup of tea, but it does have a good flow to it. well done. i hope you can use it for your band.

    ~Princess~


  • The Wall
    May 3, 2007

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    A little morbid for my liking, but well writen none the less. A nice chord structure and melody woudl make a good song out of this


  • Blackwings
    April 9, 2007

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    I liked it. It should be a great song. Yay goreiness! I like gore! I like the song and it must of taken a lot of talent to write it. Keep up the good work!


  • jtnbuck
    April 9, 2007

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    omg this was wonderful alot of talent was shown here good job i cant wait to shut up and go back to reading more of your wonderful work you are very taltet I see alot of talnet people here on sw but this was just wonderful good luck to you and god bless!! i hope the god bless dont offend you in anyway it is just something i say at the end of all my comments so the detail here was amazing and the backround was dark and it goes good with what you are writing good job with this piece...


    • Pray For Me
      April 9, 2007
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      It did not offend it. I'm actually kind of religious. Thanks for the comment.

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