As I was waiting by the door after I looked out the window.I saw him walking around all crazy as if he was drunk or something.God I was so pissed off at him for coming home so late.
So I walked over to the coffee pot and turned it off I drank so much coffee I was going to be pissing non stop for the next year.
As I was standing there thinking if I would be to kill him whould anyone find out it was me.
I herad the door open I turned around and leaned on the counter.And started playing with the little packs of suger.
"Hey susen was up my baby doll"John said"standing there rockng back and forth.with a can of beer in his hands.
"Oh.. nothing jackass why did you come home late this is bull shit"She said looking at him now standing up being just so evil looking like she was just going to grab john and kill him.
"Fuck susen I will do what I want when I want and if you don't like it fuck off"He said"raising his fist at her walking tored he like he was going to do something.
"Oh come on john what are you going to do you Son of a bitch"She said to him reaching behind her to grab the biggest knife she could feel for.
As john came closer and closer he went to raise his fist to her qagain.And susen gave him no chance at all.
She stabed him over and over again and again when she believed he had enough.She stoped and she looked at him and said.
"Sweety you will never hit me again"She said to him in the sweetest voice ever.
She new she had to take care of the body now so she wraped his lifeless body up in a white sheet as bloodcame out of the sheet getting all over my white carpet That made me so mad.
So I kicked his life less body and said.
"mother fucker you got your blood all over my rug"I said looking like I done went crazy.
So I pulled his body over to my window and opened the window and I climbed out first then pulled his body out and it was night time I can do this.
When I got to the last part of the fire exape stairs I sat him up and went to go get my car I had to be really fast I did not want anyone to find the body.
So when I got out of the car I went up to get the body and it was gone the damn body was gone I started getting really hot and nerves what the hell did I do.
The only thing I could do was freck out so I ran down to my car to leave when all I heard was.
"Well done susen you thought you killed me I new you been planing on killing me for a while I do no how to read you no I seen your jounral I put on a bullet proff vest and tomato jusie works really well"
"oh.. my god" was all I could say I new I was going to die"
But I did not die I am here in jail john was wearing a wire and a button camra and this why I'm here because I thought I killed that mother fucker.I tryed tho.
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lol....funny.
I love her attitude.
How she was cussing and stuff. 
The ending suprised me! I thought he was dead!
Near the end you switched to 'I' instead of 'her'
Fix it!
This was good though!


