You came into my life.1
You loved me like no other.2
You turned my world upside down.3
You were my everything.4
You smelled so good.5
You looked so beautiful.6
You smiled and the sun rose.7
You had the most wonderful eyes that twinkled8
like the stars in space.9
You were so funny and a delight to be with.10
You cared so much for everyone.11
You were one of a kind.12
You vanished one day.13
You are still my one and only love!14
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So many plusses in this verse, all of them wonderful memories thar you would not have had if you had not known this person. Agree with the others - very well written.
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Beautiful
I agree with you Darell, "It is better to have loved and lost than to never know love at all". Regardless, this was a very sweet and loving write. "You" must have been a very special person. I loved your beautiful poem Darell, thanks for sharing.
All my love,
Avril -
Thank you Robin. Yes both experiences touch the heart deeply.
But I guess "it's better to have loved and lost then to have
never known love at all!" Thank you for the sweet comments.
Peace and Blessings!
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This is a wonderful poem dont know if it is true or not but when you find a love like that it is the best feeling and to lose it hits hard great work on this lots of love Robin...aka SH
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fab-a-ful
well..i liked it...and i think you have found someone really special in your life...Hang on to her darell...ttyl love ya..
Amanda -
dat was nice. well when you have that one like no other you really cant think about another
but dat was really cute
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This is a very well written piece and a very pleasurable read. However, this is a short story contest. I won't disqualify you...because i don't know how go about doing that.
Thanks for entering
Janine
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