A Glance

A glance across the room started a lifetime. At least that’s the way Katie will always remember it. Katie had always envisioned the meeting something close to this, and thought she had been dreaming when the moment actually had happened. This party had been somewhat lackluster, not at all what Christina had promised her earlier that day when convincing Katie to go. “It will be a blast, a chance to get out and let your hair down.” Christina said, “Come on, Katie, you know you need a night out.” Reluctantly she agreed to go, and had been regretting it all evening. There were finals that she needed to be studying for, and this party was a bust. She had just about all that she could stand, and was getting ready to find Christina and leave, when he caught her eye.

Rob had given up. He had his choice of almost any girl he wanted, but he just couldn’t seem to find one that had any substance. He was not in the mood to go to the party, but it was expected of him to be there. He decided he was going solo to this one, he just didn’t want the inconvenience of entertaining another self-involved woman. He checked the mirror, decided he was ready, grabbed his keys and cell phone, and left.

Rob looked up and caught a beautiful brunette looking in his direction. She looked like this was the last place she wanted to be, and he knew immediately that he must get to know her. He made his way through the crowd, approached her, and introduced himself. The last thing Katie wanted was to be hit on, she was hot and tired, but something about him was different. "I'm Katie", she muttered, and looked down to straighten her dress. She couldn’t believe how uncharacteristically nervous she had instantly become.

Rob couldn’t help but smile at how nervous she was, especially since he was every bit as nervous as she. They just stood there for a moment, when Rob suggested they go outside so that they could talk. Katie agreed. The cool night air was refreshing after being in that stuffy room for so long. After some small talk, they realized that they attended the same college, Rob one year ahead of her. As Katie talked of her ambitions, Rob was silently thanking God for finally meeting someone that could see past tomorrow.

As attractive as Katie’s intelligence was to Rob, she was just as attracted to him. He was stunningly handsome, and actually had plans to go on to graduate school next fall. This was a far cry from the guys that she normally met, that could do nothing but drink and spend their parents’ money. There was something in his eyes, and though she wasn’t sure, she almost believed it to be love. She couldn’t wait to thank Christina tomorrow for dragging her to this party.

As they talked outside for hours, their hands naturally fell into place with each others. They were natural lovers who finally met their fate. The time flew by, and Christina came out looking for Katie. She told Christina to go on without her, Rob was going to give her a ride home. Christina was a little apprehensive about it, but there wasn’t much she could do, so she kissed Katie goodbye and left after receiving a promise of a phone call from Katie when she arrived home.

A light rain had started, so Katie and Rob decided to go get some coffee. Fifteen minutes later, sipping on a cappuccino, Rob couldn’t believe how lucky he was. He suspected it when he first noticed her, and now he knew it, he had found someone he would love forever. It was getting late, and he needed to get her home. As they walked outside and stopped at the car, Rob leaned down and gently kissed her on the lips. Katie felt that kiss throughout her body, and the emotion that was behind it cemented her soul to his.

While Katie was giving him directions to her apartment, his phone began to ring. Rob reached to answer it and it fell by his feet. He glanced down to find it, and Katie screamed. The car flipped three times before crashing into a tree. Rob was killed instantly, and Katie lies in a vegetative state at the hospital, remembering the glance that started her new life.

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my first short short short story....

Bronze in asmileisforever's contest

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  • One Angry Monkey
    June 10, 2007

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    Such a tragic ending. But so well written along the way. Thanks for the chance to read this, i think you have a wonderful talent to be abel to create such things. Hopefully i get the chance to read something of yours that doesn't end in tragedy.


  • FindingParamore
    September 11, 2004
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    good times

    Holy Crap! that was one of the best stories i have ever read. keep up the good work.


  • July 9, 2004
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    aww that's so sad! it was very sweet how they met and knew that they were meant for each other! and then it was like BAM!! he died and she turned to mush, so to speak! I think the ending needed to be drawn out a bit more but overall I really liked it!
    <3Adriann


  • June 11, 2004
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    Wow! That's not what I was expecting at all, but it was very good. Sad, but still good. I really liked the way you did this.

  • RollingStone
    June 6, 2004
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    whoa! the ending of this story just blew me away. caught me very off guard and not suspecting it. very powerful story.

    I had made a note or two for comments as I was reading this, but they seem insignificant now in light of the impact of the ending.

    you are a very talented writer!

    ~travis


  • June 4, 2004
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    what a sad story, it's very good though...congrads on your trophy, thanks for sharing and keep it up

    take care

    -Stac-


  • MariGoes silver member
    June 4, 2004
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    Oh...I really didn't see that end coming...why did you make it so tragic? Sorry, it is a very well written story, and the imagery so vivid that really caught my fully attention. But the end, made my heart few centimeters smaller
    Very, very sad. You are bad, you make people cry, that is how good this story is!
    Mari

  • Talia
    June 4, 2004
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    oh very good and it had a good little twist at the end as well. It's amaing how many times this actually happens you know. Good write well done mate

    Natalia

  • Cemetery Rose
    June 3, 2004
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    Oh how sad!!! The emotions just drew me in.... and I almost cried! Sounds so true too! Beautiful job and congrats on the trophy!

    Susan

  • wohadreambig
    June 3, 2004
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    Whipser
    This was a very powerful story and full of emotion. Thanks for entering my contest
    Good luck
    Janine

  • PlayLikeWeAreInLove
    June 3, 2004
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    ok

    that was a pretty good story...the ending was pretty sad...anyways, nice write, byez!
    ~confusedevryday


  • June 3, 2004
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    awwww, sad

    awww that is so sad! that is sad, but i liked it, it was very very sad, great job on this whisper,
    -L8eR-
    ~EmmA~

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