The Easter Bunny

IT was cold,

It was night,

IT was Easter saturday.

Children sleeping,

Parents Snoring,

But someone was up!

The Easter hare was on his way,

Carrying the best of chocs,

Sneaking around each house,

Putting suprises in every corner.

But as he left 45 Supride Avenue,

There was a loud crash!

The Hare hestiated,

Turned around................

And there was a meak child,

Fallen on the kitchen table,

The girl gasped.

She faced the bunny,

But as se did....

She fell on the basket,

It was so funny!!!!

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  • Miki Koishikawa
    January 18, 2008
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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww


  • Andy Stephenson gold member
    June 9, 2007

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    Cute Story!

    This is a cute little Easter Story. I don't know much about the Easter Bunny. Does it go around giving presents like Santa Claus? As a kid I would hunt Easter eggs, but I don't really know why.

    Andy

  • Meggh LotusMay
    April 17, 2007

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    This is a poem, isn't it? Hestiated is spelt hesitated. This was very good. Keep writing, Meggh, xxxxxxxxxxxx


  • Elementalwolf
    April 8, 2007
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    Sorry

    My mum made me apolagise for what I said. JUST JOKING!!! H A HA HA
    sad


  • Elementalwolf
    April 8, 2007
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    um... eh... so um..... What Is THIS ABOUT!!1


  • Elementalwolf
    April 8, 2007
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    Weird!!!

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