Julia's life isn't perfect

My whole life I have envied Julia Carver.....until Easter of 2004. Julia has always had red bouncy curls and bright blue eyes that made even an emo person smile.

Julia went to my church and she was in my Sunday school class,we were about ten. Julia came into class with bruises all up and down her arms. The teacher asked what happened and she said she fell off the monkey bars. But then her dad came to get her wayyyy before class got out and he yelled "Dang it, Julia. Wheres my coat?" JUlia got up and left the room and returned a few moments later with a fresh batch of cuts and scrapes. She said that she tripped on the way back to the class. At school the next day she was gone. The teacher said that she had been sent to a new family, because her dad beat her and threatened that if she told anyone he would kill her. I miss Julia, but I never wished I was her again.

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  • Taylor Renee
    April 8, 2007

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    wow i like this a lot! you did a rly good job with it! the plot is really great and you did a nice job wrtiting it too. i would be even better if you extended it and made it longer. great job!
    Tay