Floating amongst the clouds
Soaring higher than the birds
Is that one special girl
Who makes my heart leap.
Her hair is like silk
Her eyes, the stars.
Her smile is like a row of diamonds
Her face, so beautiful.
Words can't describe her,
Uncomparable in beauty.
She is the one who kindles the flame
In my heart.
I see her in my dreams
My soul is singing with joy
As I stare into her eyes
That glisten like the sea.
Just when I began to think
That the fading ember of my heart
Was about to die out
She brought that flame back to life.
She takes my breath away,
Grace of an angel.
She is the one who kindles the flame
In my heart.
A contest entry
- Sugary Sappy Lovey Dovey Affection by plurangel.
200 points, ended August 22, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Love Is In the Air! by lexiconsthedevil.
125 points, ended October 3, 2007, 23 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - L.O.V.E. by Crying Angel Eyes.
100 points, ended March 12, 2008, 39 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is great. thanks for the poem its beautiful
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this is amazing. you found a way to give it a flow without rhyming. good job!
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wow this seems as if it was written for someone special in your life. I bet she appreciates the kind words you wrote about her and i'm sure she loves you for it. I would definitely love it if someone wrote something this sweet and kind about me. excellent job.
goodluck in my contest
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