Hello My name is Cony I'm a girl with eigth years old.There's a mistery in my life.This is the question"Who's getting over my life or who's getting me angry"Well everything stared when I was seven years old I was also in first grade.When I was feeling left out from my life.I was thinking is this my real life or it is just a fantsy.I couldn't say why all this was happening My grades are felling,My owl was gone and my friend has more then me.This was more then my mistery.One nigth I decied to spy on people to see if someone was getting so inoing
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- 2 Minute Murder Mysteries! by Me and Lyndon.
118 points, ended April 17, 2007, 6 entries
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What?!?! you can't just do it! You should atleats tell what is the plot! problem! Solution! Everything is confuising! I mean this isn't any finished story. You can pin it. I recommend someone to help you nex time and also I recomend quick grammar check. It will help you I am sure of it. See the comment underneath! there is no people who will understand you. You can hmmmmmmmmmm. I know you can ask me! Every story has to be finished so you can get the goodies! But it is ok just get help, ANDDDD I am not insulting you ok? -
Good but there are many mistakes. Ask someone for help next time. That was confusingAaaah!hmmmm
I'm not sure what to think of this. Were all the grammar and spelling errors Thanks for entering! fñja.dkhfslandkjjksgdiskvd hhkdhsjkguegkldfhsjsjskhfkkgkkgkjjhhkkkkgghjkjhhggffgsrdhsfiuk
Hello I know is so bad -
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Ignoring a problem...which you seem to have...is not the way to deal with it. Get some help.
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