"He is a fine man. He saved you on the battle field. He brought you home to us alive.You owe him your life and he has asked for your hand i marriage and i have given permission." She was horrified at this. She didn't want to get married. "I will not marry him. You can't make me." She screamed turning away from her father. Her father was furiouse at this and said,"You will do as your told. You will marry him in five days time and you will learn to love him." She turned tward him and screamed in his face,"I will never marry him!" Her father got up and walked out of the room. Sara started to cry and her brothers came closer to her to try to comfort her. "Who is he, this man i'm supposed to marry, who is he?" She asked finally able to speak through her tears. Her twin brother Jacob answered her,"His name is Jared Bar-Fall from Karden. He is a prince who was exiled because he betrayed his king." He was the closest to her because he was her twin. His brothers were close to her but they weren't as close to her as he was. They were the youngest and niether one of them had known there mother. She had died after giving birth to them.
Arron stood up and said,"We tried to tell father that he only wanted to marry you for your title, but he wouldn't listen to us."
"Couldn't you persuade him." She asked looking at each of them in turn. Her eyes were filled with saddness and her brothers couldn't stand to see there little sister like this. "We tried for days little sister. we really tried. We knew you would refuse." Adam her oldest brother said. He was the one who would get the throne. Adam would rule when her father passed and went to the halls of his fathers. "I won't marry him. You guys have to find me a way out of this mess. Please find me a way out," She sobbed. Her brothers promised her then they left her in her room to get some more sleep. Sara passed into a dreamless sleep and was woken up in the early morning by her brother Jacob shaking her.
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I love this so far. I hope she doesnt marry him. I cant wait to see who Liam is I'll read the next part as soon as I can.
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This is good background material... I hate to do this, but I felt that it warranted it... not trying to nitpick but in these lines there is a missing letter and furious is not spelled with an e at the end. The line that is missing a letter is this line:
he has asked for your hand i marriage and i have given permission... the n for in marriage is missing... just fyi... otherwise great chapter...
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