“Not a rose”

“Not a rose”

“By: Bedig Hindoyian”

• I don’t want to love a rose

That has pricks and thorns sharp expose

Prickly petals among the wind that blows

As it rips my heart out with it claws

• I want to love a flower so red

They live wounded bleeding so bad

My heart pricked impaled and sad

With thorns on me prick and clad

• I don’t want to love a rose so fake

Poisonous like an evil snake

To seem to love then drop me to break

Wounds bleed and I drown in a lake

• Not a rose not a rose

I hug thee but thorn grows

Your love is like my flaws

Your pricks like spikes glows

• I want a Lillie

That shines in a glee

Not a rose prickly like thee

That’s what best for me

• I want a tulip

With glossy red lips

No pricks on your fingertips

From whom I bow into sips

• I want a carnelian

Better if you were a jasmine

A soft supple skin

On sweet petals I dance and spin

• Better to be a daisy

Not a rose with thorns so hazy

A yellow white glazing daisy

Not a prickled rose driving me crazy

• Anything but a rose

That has pricks and thorns sharp expose

Prickly petals among the wind that blows

As it rips my heart out with it claws

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On: Friday, April 06, 2007

At: 4:12:09 PM

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  • CrystalFlower
    April 26, 2007
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    really good poem here, enjoyed it a lot.


  • Blackwings
    April 15, 2007
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    I liked it But not all roses have thorns But still was good


  • jtnbuck
    April 14, 2007

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    wow good job i liked this alot the emeion was very good great job once again and good luck in my contest keep up the good work and god bless!!


  • asthray.heart
    April 6, 2007

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    Wow this well done, you gave good description and emotion in which flower you wanted.

    Good jobby.

    Em.


  • LostShadow silver member
    April 6, 2007
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    wonderful
    well done

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