Sorrow

Lying here on this hard, cold floor

i see you bleeding and walkking out the door.

The drops of blood falling ever so slow

i want you to love please don't go.

The cut in your chest is so wide and red

all i can see is you in m head.

It wasn't fate or ment to be

i know for sure it wasn't destiny.

So tell me now, were we ment to be?

i love and care, if you'd only seen.

Now i see is you in my head

no clothes on you, you are draped in red.

My heart beats so strongly

only for you.

I lay on the floor asking; was this true..

Was it ment to be this way for me

or was this something that i was seeing.

As i lay on this hard, cold floor

Lying here on this hard, cold floor

i see you bleeding and walkking out the door.

The drops of blood falling ever so slow

i want you and love you please don't go.

So i stare at your picture and find this was true

you left me alone, to melt into due,

I love you and care; if only you would see

if you came back we could have been happy.

Please tell me what you think

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  • bedovich
    May 6, 2007
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    cooooooool

    this is so greattttttttttttttttttttttttt i am so glad meeting you hope we can be friends:$

  • NyteShade
    April 27, 2007
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    oh wow chicki very nicely done. you never cease to amaze me with your stories and poetry.