Evry Tear Has A Bigining (chapter one)

In a swamp there lay a small building. But there were no doors, no windows. And somthing secret lay inside.

How do you get inside? No one knows. But people have tried. And tried. And so another great chase has began. But this one will be even more dangerouse!

A woman all in green walked up to the building. She was tall and skinny. She knocked on the wall of the building. It was hollow. She knocked again. She stopped. She ahd heard foot steps. She bent down and put her ear to the ground. She was right. Someone was coming. And by the sound of it there were many people. For the ground was shaking with hoof beats and the sound of armour clanging together. But she could sense fear and great evil to.

She started to get up but her dress snaged on a twig. Were had that twig come from? She had not seen it a couple minuts ago! She got out a small knife and cut her way out. Then she ran. She ran and ran. She ran for all she was worth! Then she saw a big pit. She ran and heaved herself into the pit.

It was dark and damp. Darkness enclosed and safety was found. She sighed. She stood up and put her hands on the walls. They were stone! Not dirt but stone! Were was she? She felt the walls again. It was not plain stone the one you would have found outside but marble. Very rich and unique marble. She fingered the walls again. There were some footholds and handrests in the wall to so it was easy to climb up.

She poked her head out. She gasped. Before her lay a whole army of shadows all in black armour. Then in the middle was the building. A man stood at the front of it. He wore a black hood and a blood red cape. But the cape was not just the color of blood it was stained with blood. It was DomDaniel and his army of shadows. For

this first time in her life she was deathly scared!

She dropped back into the pit. If DomDaniel was here he would find her and then she would be dead gone. She fingered the walls all around in a circle. And then she found a flap! She pushed it a little more and it opened to leave a tine space. Just enough for her to squeeze in! It was a big earthen tunnel! She crawled through the long tunnel and found herself in a dead end. Or was it? She tried to stand up but hit the hard earth cieling. But then she hit wood! She hit it again and it opened to reveal trees and no sky. She pushed herself up and found herself in the forest.

But she was not safe yet as DomDaniel was coming back with no luck and was as mad as ever! If he found her this time she would surely die. She tried to open the trapdoor again but it would no budge. So she ran deeper into the woods not knowing were she ran except away from DomDaniel and his army. She ran and ran until her legs could nit carry her any more and she collapsed on the ground.

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  • schizophrenic
    April 6, 2007
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    a lot of typos but its interesting as a start.