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A roguish band of bards2
were banned from site AP3
The reason they were barred4
Is explained quite easily.5
One poet said aloud6
“In her meter she has erred7
That subject’s not allowed!8
And your rhymes aren’t well prepared.”9
Another of his friends10
said a poem left him un-awed11
instead he said the author12
seemed boring, slow and odd.13
The last unlucky poet14
said a poem he’d gladly alter.15
But the poem in question twernt his own16
But a newbie who had faltered.17
They aired problems on the altar18
of rhyming verse critique.19
but this wasn’t college writing class20
but a poetry boutique.21
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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Great ob here
you have used the homophon properly and you even made it flow and rhyme great too thanks so much for entering mine and pinkwhites contest and good luck
Rowena Jo -
great! lol, you have used the homophones and you made it flow! That is a very hard thing to do,lol Thanks for entering my and wizzy Jo's contest and good luck ..
pinkwhite -
a joy to read
This is brilliant. I do enjoy when you come out and play.
I would pick a favorite bit but it is ally great.
Wonderful.
John -
Flawless, as usual.
Dear Jenny,
Well it seems that all my writing
Has all those faults you list
And in any case, whate'er I write
Gets everybody pissed.
So I will just keep silent and
Not say another word.
I'll stick to memorising 'coz
I am the self-made Nerd!!
A good write with great homothingummy examples! I applaud it!
And now I discover that homophones aren't what I thought they were at all!! (Will you two guys get off the line please?)
Good luck in the contest, hun.
Love and hugs, XXX Hugh.
Edited on Jun 02, 8:36 p.m. because 'Forgot full-stop. Again!'.
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