It's Cold

The raging cold wind made it difficult for me to wind my way through the forest.It blew so hard and cold my fanny turned blue.I took shelter behind a yew and cried out for you.You found where I did hide and saved my hide.My tail is now warmed,thus ends this tale.1

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  • June 10, 2004
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    lol, even though this is only short, you have used the homphones well .. Thanks for entering my and wizzy Jo's contest and good luck ..

    pinkwhite

  • macandrew
    June 7, 2004
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    good

    Well done Bill. Love to see yew used to aid those in need. Time to get off my fanny and go bend my yew (longbow).

    John


  • mommabug silver member
    June 2, 2004
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    very good

    liked this!...mb

  • Billbard
    June 2, 2004
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    Fanny is slang for rear end,behind etc.Bill

  • Wizzy Jo
    June 2, 2004
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    Great write here I really like this but well what is a fanny? is that bum/botom where you live or the other thing? lol anyways thanks for entering my contest and good luck
    Rowena Jo

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