Dear [jerkface],
I [fuckn hate] you.
You have a nice [imaginary brain].
You make me [feel like throwing up at the sight of your face].
You should [accidently fall off a cliff].
Someday I will [decapitate you].
You + me = [nothing anymore].
If I saw you now I'd [slap you].
I want to [torture] you.
I would build a [death trap] just for you.
If I could sing you any song it would be [i doneby daneille peck)].
i wish could[i could kill u] under the stars.
Love,
[Lil Miss Redneck]
(P.S. [I hate youand hope you will leave me alone].)
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Nice work!
I don't know what I would do if I got a letter like this...maybe laugh it off..anyways it was a great read! -
the brackets are for you to take this and place it on your page with your own words
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interesting. i don't really understand whats up with the brackets, but i think i figured it out.. this is actually humorous! good write,
beginning: 3, language: 4, plot: 5, ending: 4, dialog: 2, characters: 2.
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Funny. I like the way that you did this. There are a few capitalization problems and little things like that. But it is still really good.
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