I own only what I’m holding,
I live where I’m standing,
I look to the horizon,
And I am what I dream.
A contest entry
- Under 200 words by QueenWolf.
140 points, ended May 22, 2007, 49 entries
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121 points, ended July 22, 2007, 17 entries
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100 points, ended March 6, 2008, 16 entries
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Any comments welcome
Comments
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this reminds me of that song called I hope u dance. haha. anyways. very touching. thx for entering!
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This is very beautiful, and touching. It's short but it says so much in such a few words. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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Oh wow. Awesomessss. I like it a lot. All four lines spoke to me.. keep up the astounding work!
~Kevan!~
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Very touching. I love the entire feel of it. .Whimsical and fleeting... Amazing work.
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its an interesting creative poem. i like it..great job!
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Nice poem--you did well at expressing the idea in a minimum of words. Good luck in the contest, and thanks for entering!
beginning: 1, language: 2, plot: 2, ending: 2, dialog: 1, characters: 1.
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Different.... ummm, interesting... Well done, good luck in my contest.
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Good!
Hey, when I saw this I was expecting something really dumb and boring...I mean, less than 100 words, you know? What can somebody do with that.
Well, I was wrong. YOU can do a lot with less than 100 words--you really helped me delve into your mind with this piece.
Good work. I've got to give you something for proving me wrong. I'd give you a medal if I had one, but I'll give you an applause instead.
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Its me life some days in all our minds.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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